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College Essay Written Feedback


Finding and implementing strategies for successful writing is the most important thing a student can do to succeed on college essays. On the Yahara wants to help you achieve your academic goals by giving you the tools you need to create a compelling and attention-catching college admission essay.

Our Process:

When you sign up for our college essay feedback services, you sign up for two online sessions plus email follow ups. During our first virtual meeting, we will go over any writing requirements, provide you with guidance to get started, and come up with a plan customized to your needs and goals.

Then, once we receive your first draft, we will review it and promptly schedule the feedback meeting. During it, we will review your work and provide you with detailed, actionable feedback to perfect your work.

After our second session, we will be available to review your next draft over email and promptly send you feedback.

Throughout the process we will look at both small and large concerns, such as sentence-by-sentence issues, paragraph structure, theme, essay intention level, etc.

By the time our two sessions are completed, you will have a better understanding of how to succeed with your essay. 


  • Price: $75/essay (includes two 45 minute online video meetings and email follow ups)
  • Format: Our online meetings take place through a secured and private video chat platform
  • Requirements: Internet access and access to a computer or phone with working microphone and audio (camera is optional)

Do you think you could benefit from our college essay feedback services? Fill out the form below and we will contact you to schedule your free consultation.

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